Here are some pointers on how to start formal email
Always start a formal email with the persons name if you know it and always Mr, Mrs, Dr or whatever title they may have, remember to follow a title with their last name. Also starting with Dear is also acceptable. If you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to always start with Dear Sir or Madam or to whom it may concern. Using words like Hi, Hello or even Hey are no no’s in a formal email.
Tell the person you are writing to who you are and what you are asking about, in the first paragraph. You could start the email like this,
‘My name is Jonathan Evens’ I am contacting you to apply for an administrative position.
It is important that the recipient knows very early in the email what you are asking or what you want. This will make the purpose of your email clear and a clear and straight to the point email will receive a clear response from the recipient, at least it should.
Formal emails are written to give a good impression and to show your professionalism, so always avoid the following:
Slang
Emoticons
Profanity
Jokes
And finally
As with salutations as mentioned above, there are many ways you can close a formal email.
Always close with your full name and job title. Also close with any of the following:
Yours Sincerely
Yours Cordially
Respectfully
These are three that I use in my emails, but there are others you can use, it is a preference thing, so use the one you like most.
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